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    April 11th, 2006Jane EspensonOn Writing

    Hi! You’re at the end of a scene, or the end of an act. And your hero has something to say. Do not let him say it twice. Just because you see it done, doesn’t mean you have to do it.

    HERO
    I certainly hope so, my friend. I certainly hope so.

    Really. Don’t do it.

    Lunch: turkey lunchmeat and sauerkraut rolled in cabbage leaves.